Officer Log
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Officer Log
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Nod Officer Log, March 15th, 2072
Today has been a glorious day for the Brotherhood. It started as any other day. As I began my duties, repairing the damn fuel cells on the GDI weapons factory, I look at my surroundings. The Tiberium Myst rising out of the chasm was peaceful … calming … but it would not be that way for long. I finished the repairs and returned to the barracks. That’s when I heard her voice screech over my Nod secure-frequency radio. Operation DarkLight was a go… I waited for my orders… silence … suddenly the White Lady was there again, barking commands. Infiltrate the GDI power station and disable the grid… Getting in was the easy part. A quick flash of my ID and I was in. Working quickly, I rerouted the power to the generators forcing a circuit loop and shorting out the base’s power. GDI’s defenses were down! Seconds later gunfire and yelling erupted all around me… Using the distraction, I exited the building and activated my beacon. I was always amazed watching reckoner’s burrow and this was no different. I made my escape and we were soon underground. Relaxing in the APC’s seating, I reached under my flak vest and pulled out a crinkled sheet of paper. Unfolding it I looked in amazement… Cabal had been ingenious and GDI’s vast information databases proved invaluable once again… soon a new obelisk would rise against GDI … the obelisk … of darkness.
Nod Officer Log, March 15th, 2072
Today has been a glorious day for the Brotherhood. It started as any other day. As I began my duties, repairing the damn fuel cells on the GDI weapons factory, I look at my surroundings. The Tiberium Myst rising out of the chasm was peaceful … calming … but it would not be that way for long. I finished the repairs and returned to the barracks. That’s when I heard her voice screech over my Nod secure-frequency radio. Operation DarkLight was a go… I waited for my orders… silence … suddenly the White Lady was there again, barking commands. Infiltrate the GDI power station and disable the grid… Getting in was the easy part. A quick flash of my ID and I was in. Working quickly, I rerouted the power to the generators forcing a circuit loop and shorting out the base’s power. GDI’s defenses were down! Seconds later gunfire and yelling erupted all around me… Using the distraction, I exited the building and activated my beacon. I was always amazed watching reckoner’s burrow and this was no different. I made my escape and we were soon underground. Relaxing in the APC’s seating, I reached under my flak vest and pulled out a crinkled sheet of paper. Unfolding it I looked in amazement… Cabal had been ingenious and GDI’s vast information databases proved invaluable once again… soon a new obelisk would rise against GDI … the obelisk … of darkness.
Last edited by JPNyt on Thu Apr 22, 2010 7:13 pm; edited 1 time in total
JPNyt- Posts : 33
Join date : 2010-03-10
Re: Officer Log
a few small improvment to be made
but nice, you baised it off of what i worte
but nice, you baised it off of what i worte
Spider_Pig_Rocks- Posts : 165
Join date : 2010-02-14
Age : 30
Location : Chicago :)
Re: Officer Log
Let me know how to improve it. And yes, I wanted it to be as close to what you wrote as possible. I made a few changes for emphasis so the story could be told easier/better.
Spider_pig, can you add me on Xfire? JPNyt.
Spider_pig, can you add me on Xfire? JPNyt.
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